Work peer assessed by: David Blight Work assessed:Connor and Josh Connor did his well because he also said who he did the sport with. He could have used more than one tense to make it better.
Josh was very detailed in his work. He could have also used more than one tense to make it better.
Work peer assessed by: Stephanie' Work assessed: Olivia Olivia did her sticky note well because she used all three tenses in her sticky note and also included things like who she did it with and how it was. I also spotted a few mistakes though, like when she put 'je joué' instead of 'j'ai joué', and when she put 'avec ma souer s'appelle Megan' instead of 'avec ma souer qui s'appelle Megan'.
Work peer assessed by:Charlotte Cullen Work assessed:Callum P Callum`s work was very intreting no mistakes were made . But i thought it was just a bit to short Well Done Callum
Work peer assessed by: Melissa Work Assessed: Stephanie and Maria Stephanie: Steph's sticky note was very good because she explained it well and she also said who she did her sport with. The only thing i spotted was that she hadn't used all three tenses.
Maria: Maria's sticky note was good because she explained that she liked tennis and dance and she also said that she played it with her sister and danced with her friend. The only mistake was that she had said 'cars' for because but she should have written 'car'. I also thought that she should have used all tenses. Overall i thought both stephanie's and maria's piece of work was very good. WELL DONE!!!!!! xx
work peer assessed by: Harriet Nolan work assessed: steph and olivia olivia: you have written a great paragraph about what you do. good french and puncuation and also it makes sense, and good info. the mistake you put was instead of putting qui s'appelle she put s'appelle! Steph:steph did a great post stick and wrote a great paragraph! she did puncuation well and did very good french! the only mistake was she only used 1 tense instead of past present and future! Well Done!! xx
Work peer assessed by: Sophie Work assessed: Olivia and Harriet
Olivia: She has done a detailed piece of work and has put in what she does and who she has done it with. However there were a couple of mistakes Instead of putting ' j'ai joué ' she put ' je joue '. Lastly, she put ' s'appelle Megan ' instead of putting ' qui s'appelle Megan ' Overall a very good piece of work!!! Well Done!!!
Harriet: She has done a good piece of work. She has put in what she does. However she has only put in one tense and it is a bit short! But overall a good piece of work! Well Done!!!
Work peer assesed by:francesca Work assesed: stephanie and Charlottte
Stephanie:Has done a really good peice of work well thought of. But she could have made her pargraph with more descrptions and is she has done more sports but other all she has done a really good piece of work! well done xx
Charlotte:She has done a really good piece of work and it is well thought of and described it was a really good piece of work to read. well done xx
Work assesed by: Jonathan C Work assesed: Callum P and Luke Callum:I think that callum has produced a detailed piece of work and has no mistackes. Luke: I think Luke has produced a good piece of work but has one mistack. Appart from that it is very detailed and good.
Work assessed by: Olivia Work assessed: Harriet and Sophie: Harriet: I thought your work was very good as you some different words, and it was very clear and simple but interesting to read. Just being picking but capital letters!! It was great work. Well done Harriet!! Sophie: I thought your work was also great as you used all three tense which made it very interesting. Instead of writing 'dans le park' you could have written ' au park'. Overall, Well done Sophie!!
Work peer assessed by luke murray Work assessed Jonathan C and Callum p Jonathan C: thought it was a good piece of french with no mistakes at all but you could of made it more complex. Callum p:I think that callum has produced a detailed piece of work .
Work assessed by Patrick Cannon Work assesing Luke Murray & Jonathan Clark Luke: A Good piece says alot in a little sentence. :) Jonathan: Another good piece and i like the fact that your family play ruby with you and you think it is fantastic :) Well done both of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
Work assesed by Callum o Assessing Dominic and Luke Luke:His work has a Good detailed sentence only one mistake. Dominic: Good sentence that is explained with few mistakes . Target : Both need to write more.
Work assessed by: Conor Cullen Work assessed: David and James David did well because he used three tenses. He should have spelt copain instead of copine.
James did well because he did everything right. He could have written more.
Work assessed by : Emilia Mann I think that stephaneeeeeyyyyyyyyy did really well and obviously looked things up out of her book for help her centences were very good and they included many things
Work assessed by: Keiran I liked Jonos work cos he did a very good peice and I think that it includded alot of good things and his French has improved alot over the stages of year 7
Work assesed by: Dominic P I like Luke's work because it was short and simple but you made a common mistake. You put a instead of au before you said football. Well done though.
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Work peer assessed by: David Blight
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Connor did his well because he also said who he did the sport with. He could have used more than one tense to make it better.
Josh was very detailed in his work. He could have also used more than one tense to make it better.
Work peer assessed by: Stephanie'
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Olivia did her sticky note well because she used all three tenses in her sticky note and also included things like who she did it with and how it was.
I also spotted a few mistakes though, like when she put 'je joué' instead of 'j'ai joué', and when she put 'avec ma souer s'appelle Megan' instead of 'avec ma souer qui s'appelle Megan'.
Well done Oliviaa!'
Work peer assessed by:Charlotte Cullen
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Callum`s work was very intreting no mistakes were made .
But i thought it was just a bit to short
Well Done Callum
Work peer assessed by: Melissa
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Stephanie: Steph's sticky note was very good because she explained it well and she also said who she did her sport with.
The only thing i spotted was that she hadn't used all three tenses.
Maria: Maria's sticky note was good because she explained that she liked tennis and dance and she also said that she played it with her sister and danced with her friend.
The only mistake was that she had said 'cars' for because but she should have written 'car'.
I also thought that she should have used all tenses. Overall i thought both stephanie's and maria's piece of work was very good.
WELL DONE!!!!!! xx
work peer assessed by: Harriet Nolan
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olivia: you have written a great paragraph about what you do. good french and puncuation and also it makes sense, and good info. the mistake you put was instead of putting qui s'appelle she put s'appelle!
Steph:steph did a great post stick and wrote a great paragraph! she did puncuation well and did very good french! the only mistake was she only used 1 tense instead of past present and future!
Well Done!! xx
Work peer assessed by Alex
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I liked the way James put an opinion into his work but I think he could have used more tenses.
Work assessed: David
He put all the tenses into his work but didn't have an opinion and he used the feminine form of the word friend (copine) when referring to a boy.
work assessed by Natasha
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David used all of his tenses and gave lots of detail but he used the feminine word for FRIEND when talking about a boy.
Josh put in a lot of good detail when talking about what sports he did but if he had used more tenses his word may have been better
Work peer assessed by: Sophie
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Olivia: She has done a detailed piece of work and has put in what she does and who she has done it with. However there were a couple of mistakes Instead of putting ' j'ai joué ' she put ' je joue '. Lastly, she put ' s'appelle Megan ' instead of putting ' qui s'appelle Megan ' Overall a very good piece of work!!! Well Done!!!
Harriet: She has done a good piece of work. She has put in what she does. However she has only put in one tense and it is a bit short! But overall a good piece of work! Well Done!!!
Work peer assesed by:francesca
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Stephanie:Has done a really good peice of work well thought of. But she could have made her pargraph with more descrptions and is she has done more sports but other all she has done a really good piece of work! well done xx
Charlotte:She has done a really good piece of work and it is well thought of and described it was a really good piece of work to read.
well done xx
Work assesed by: Jonathan C
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Callum:I think that callum has produced a detailed piece of work and has no mistackes.
Luke: I think Luke has produced a good piece of work but has one mistack. Appart from that it is very detailed and good.
Work assessed by: Olivia
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Harriet: I thought your work was very good as you some different words, and it was very clear and simple but interesting to read. Just being picking but capital letters!! It was great work. Well done Harriet!!
Sophie: I thought your work was also great as you used all three tense which made it very interesting. Instead of writing 'dans le park' you could have written ' au park'. Overall, Well done Sophie!!
:)
Work peer assessed by luke murray
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Jonathan C: thought it was a good piece of french with no mistakes at all but you could of made it more complex.
Callum p:I think that callum has produced a detailed piece of work .
Work assessed by Patrick Cannon
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Luke: A Good piece says alot in a little sentence. :)
Jonathan: Another good piece and i like the fact that your family play ruby with you and you think it is fantastic :)
Well done both of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
Work assesed by Callum o
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Luke:His work has a Good detailed sentence only one mistake.
Dominic: Good sentence that is explained with few mistakes .
Target : Both need to write more.
Work assessed by: Conor Cullen
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David did well because he used three tenses. He should have spelt copain instead of copine.
James did well because he did everything right. He could have written more.
Work assessed by : Emilia Mann
ReplyDeleteI think that stephaneeeeeyyyyyyyyy did really well and obviously looked things up out of her book for help her centences were very good and they included many things
Work assessed by: Keiran
ReplyDeleteI liked Jonos work cos he did a very good peice and I think that it includded alot of good things and his French has improved alot over the stages of year 7
how comes that it all comes up under franchescas name?
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ReplyDeleteI like Luke's work because it was short and simple but you made a common mistake. You put a instead of au before you said football. Well done though.